hey there anybody i am wondering if this letter is good enough to send out for charity,if not could someone please correct it and make it sounds nicer? then send it back to me again:) via e-mail :
jelmer_4ever@hotmail.com
cya jelmer ( below is the letter )
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Dear XXXX
My name is XXXXXXXX and I am XXXXXXX years old.
I am writing in the hope that you will be able to help me in my attempt to raise funds for the children in Uganda. The money will be donated to warchild, to: Postbank Giro 6366
I am collecting autographs for a local charity, warchild. The autographs will be donated to the charity auction for December 2007
warchild needs €200,000 to help the children in Uganda, that need help after they had a war. We are helping them so they can get a better education and a better live without war and a better future as well.
This is what has lead me to you.
It is our hope that willing celebrities will be generous enough to donate signed memorabilia or photographs for prizes, which will serve as a real incentive for people to participate.
If this is possible, I am sure it would be greatly received.
All the best
thank you for your generous support.
Yours sincerely,
hey there anybody i am wondering if this letter is good enough to send out for charity,if not could someone please correct it and make it sounds nicer? then send it back to me again:) via e-mail : jelmer_4ever@hotmail.com
cya jelmer ( below is the letter )
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Dear XXXX
My name is XXXXXXXX and I am XXXXXXX years old.
I am writing in the hope that you will be able to help me in my attempt to raise funds for the children in Uganda. The money will be donated to warchild, to: Postbank Giro 6366
I am collecting autographs for a local charity, warchild. The autographs will be donated to the charity auction for December 2007
warchild needs €200,000 to help the children in Uganda, that need help after they had a war. We are helping them so they can get a better education and a better live without war and a better future as well.
This is what has lead me to you.
It is our hope that willing celebrities will be generous enough to donate signed memorabilia or photographs for prizes, which will serve as a real incentive for people to participate.
If this is possible, I am sure it would be greatly received.
All the best
thank you for your generous support.
Yours sincerely,