good work and thanks.

Its really great
keep up the good work

what do you think of my songtekst :


Better off

I’m sitting here all alone,
Wondering what went wrong,
So many tears I cryed
It shouldnt end this way, I hope i’ll understand one day
Why you woudn’t stay.
You turned my heart into stone,
I can’t smile anymore, and i can’t feel sence you walked out off that door.
This empty feeling is killing me inside,
I wanna hide my pain, because you’ve moved on
You never felt the same. {Never felt the same}

(Course)
The darkness is falling over me,
I can’t see the light
It’s its taking control over me
You know this can’t be right baby {ohhh can’t be right Babyyyy}
I’m better off . ohh better off

Help let me outt (let me ouuutt)
I’m screaming as loud as i can, why anybody can’t hear me out.
I wanna feel free, just let you see
I’m beeing less like you and more like me.
I wanna forget about you, and go on living my life.
I can’t let the darkness controle no more
Because i know i ones saw the light.
Now I know that you’re not wright for me, you’re scared .That I’ll be everuthing you never could be.


(Course)
The darkness is falling over me,
I can’t see the light
It’s its taking control over me
You know this can’t be right baby {ohhh can’t be right Babyyyy}
Tell me i’m better off, I’m better off


Im not that person i used to be,
I’m stronger; better, I’m more than you made off me. {Ooohh so much more}
First i wanted to escape reality, but now that i’ve see,
That reality can be better than a dream
Oow Baby I’m never going back. {Never ever going backkk}
And now i know me and you were never a fact.

W0oow the darkness is gone,
I’ve finally moved on,
Baby after so much messary, it’s true
I’m better off without you. (Yeahh better off, better off without you)

thanks alot guys i really apreciate it.

WOW
thats really nice, Great work!
I sure would love to see some more!lol
ive always wanted to write, i actually have written a couple of poems and 1 story, but the language i use is Filipino(tagalog) so, umm...anyway, Good Job Anthony! {thumb2}

Nice job. You have a lot of talent.
I, too, want to be a writer when I'm older, so I get where you're coming from.

That's really touching Anthony. It's obvious you put a lot of thought in to that

hey guys i just wrote a little poem/note so please give it a read. it doesent ryhme all that much but its something that i wrote from my heart so ya. but ya its right here

let it be
life may not always treat us kind, it hurts us in the worst way by taking away our freinds and family.and some may say why does everybody leave this world.and to awnser the qusteion i must say, we all have to leave sometime, and when we all do, should it be a sad afair no because were truly in a better place.
paragraph 2
we wake up in the morning we do what we gotta do, we brush our teeths comb our hair and have a glass of juice. on a saturday we wake up late in the day turn on the ball game and just relax. but somewhere else in the world theirs a kid our age possibly even younger strugling to find something to eat. we truly have a good life and if our biggest worry is someting simple like worrying about a sporting event or worrying about school, then truly we are lucky. and hopefully their will be no teardrops on our guitars for whatever reason, and be more smiles on our faces.

hope you engoyed it. ill probally write and post more. ps please tell me what you think i know its not great but its someting i did try and work hard on.

also as a lot of you know i wanna be a writer one day its my dream job so really wish me luck guys.