by Jaffer » Wed Aug 07, 2013 7:55 am
If I had photoshop or something similar, it would be easier to point out my concerns. The most pressing issue is the J. This lacks the circular flow of the ip example, you can see it is more rigid. I also have concerns about the linking of the J to the triangle, as well as the "triangle" itself. The Lawrence looks good, although the ending of the second one looks ever so slightly iffy. I shall definitely continue browsing to try and find an ip that matches though. I would definitely hold onto this though.
If I had photoshop or something similar, it would be easier to point out my concerns. The most pressing issue is the J. This lacks the circular flow of the ip example, you can see it is more rigid. I also have concerns about the linking of the J to the triangle, as well as the "triangle" itself. The Lawrence looks good, although the ending of the second one looks ever so slightly iffy. I shall definitely continue browsing to try and find an ip that matches though. I would definitely hold onto this though.