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Re: What do you think of my letter?

by lim10337 » Wed Oct 07, 2009 12:19 pm

hmm...sorry what do you mean?

so is there any other correct way I can ask about my name?

How do you like my English name, Shane?
How's my English name, Shane?
Do you like my English name, Shane?
...........................
...........................

I need questions which can lead to more than just 'yes or no' answer...


'I feel down when somebody mistakes my name as a name for girls'
Is this sentence correct?


I need a title for my questionnaire. Can you guys help me?

Will my letter(not questionnaire) and autograph return together?

Re: What do you think of my letter?

by musicfan » Wed Oct 07, 2009 8:42 am

lim10337 wrote:But if I ask 'Do you like my American name?' his answer would only be 'yes or no'...but I want more...

ps. are you sure 'American name'? not 'English name'?
Whatever Floats Your Boat! :) GOOD LUCK.

Re: What do you think of my letter?

by KatrinaLouise » Wed Oct 07, 2009 7:33 am

lim10337 wrote:But if I ask 'Do you like my American name?' his answer would only be 'yes or no'...but I want more...

ps. are you sure 'American name'? not 'English name'?
I personally would say English name as this seems to be correct. American is not a language - English is. Plus the origin of the name Shane is English.

Re: What do you think of my letter?

by lim10337 » Wed Oct 07, 2009 5:00 am

But if I ask 'Do you like my American name?' his answer would only be 'yes or no'...but I want more...

ps. are you sure 'American name'? not 'English name'?

Re: What do you think of my letter?

by musicfan » Wed Oct 07, 2009 4:46 am

lim10337 wrote:Can anyone help me check my questionnaire again? Thank you.

For Josh Only or Just For Josh(Is it ok? I need a title for this questionnaire...)

(1) How tall are you?
____________________________________________________________________________

(2) What do you usually do when you are free? ____________________________________________________________________________

(3) What’s your favorite film? ____________________________________________________________________________

(4) What are your favorite actor and actress? ____________________________________________________________________________

(5) What’s your favorite kind of music? ____________________________________________________________________________

(6) Is your next film called ‘When In Rome’? How do you like it?
____________________________________________________________________________

(7) What kind of character do you love playing the most? ____________________________________________________________________________

(8) What’s your favorite singer or group? ____________________________________________________________________________

(9) What’s your favorite kind of sport? ____________________________________________________________________________

(10)How do you like Taiwan? ____________________________________________________________________________

(11)What would you do to make the world the better place?
____________________________________________________________________________

(12)Do you keep any pet? What is it?
____________________________________________________________________________

(13)How do you like my English name, Shane? I feel down when somebody mistakes my name
as a name for girls…
____________________________________________________________________________



Any grammar fault in my questionnaire? especially the (13) I'm not quite sure how to say that...
In Question 11..it should be "...The World A Better Place"...In 12 It Should Be Pets With A "S"..And I Wouldnt Do The LAST QUESTION...Or Jus Say "Do You Like My American Name "Shane"....Ok? :) Good Luck! :)

Re: What do you think of my letter?

by lim10337 » Wed Oct 07, 2009 4:10 am

Can anyone help me check my questionnaire again? Thank you.

For Josh Only or Just For Josh(Is it ok? I need a title for this questionnaire...)

(1) How tall are you?
____________________________________________________________________________

(2) What do you usually do when you are free? ____________________________________________________________________________

(3) What’s your favorite film? ____________________________________________________________________________

(4) What are your favorite actor and actress? ____________________________________________________________________________

(5) What’s your favorite kind of music? ____________________________________________________________________________

(6) Is your next film called ‘When In Rome’? How do you like it?
____________________________________________________________________________

(7) What kind of character do you love playing the most? ____________________________________________________________________________

(8) What’s your favorite singer or group? ____________________________________________________________________________

(9) What’s your favorite kind of sport? ____________________________________________________________________________

(10)How do you like Taiwan? ____________________________________________________________________________

(11)What would you do to make the world the better place?
____________________________________________________________________________

(12)Do you keep any pet? What is it?
____________________________________________________________________________

(13)How do you like my English name, Shane? I feel down when somebody mistakes my name
as a name for girls…
____________________________________________________________________________



Any grammar fault in my questionnaire? especially the (13) I'm not quite sure how to say that...

Re: What do you think of my letter?

by musicfan » Wed Oct 07, 2009 2:44 am

lim10337 wrote:Thank you.

But I'm still not sure how to say 'Beside, would you please fill out my questionnaire on another paper?'

Is that right? 'on another paper'....
No Not Like That:

Say IT Like This:

If IT Isnt Too Much Trouble I Attacted a QUESTIONAIRE..Could You Please Fill It Out...THANK YOU SOOO MUCH! :) Like That...ok? :)

Re: What do you think of my letter?

by musicfan » Wed Oct 07, 2009 2:42 am

KamenRiderDecade2009 wrote:I would tone down the letter a bit, Here is how I would send it.

Dear Josh,

My name is Shane. I’m from Taiwan. I’m 19 years old and a sophomore in Chung Yuan Christian University.

I am fan of you and your films especially Transformers. It’s very popular here in Taiwan and is probably the coolest film I’ve ever seen.

I was wondering, if it’s not too much trouble, Could I please request an Autographed picture of yourself.

enclosed is my sase.

I’m sorry if my handwriting is hard for you to read or my English is not easy for you to understand. That’s because English is not my language.

Thanks for spending your precious time reading my letter and thanks for your autograph! I appreciate it!!


Wish you a big success

Shane
YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :) I Jept Saying Its a BIT To Long But Everyone Would Yell @ Me...lol But YES Thats How You Do It,,SHORT AND SIMPLE....Not Long And True Hollywood Story-ISH.:)

Re: What do you think of my letter?

by KamenRiderDecade2009 » Wed Oct 07, 2009 1:12 am

I would tone down the letter a bit, Here is how I would send it.

Dear Josh,

My name is Shane. I’m from Taiwan. I’m 19 years old and a sophomore in Chung Yuan Christian University.

I am fan of you and your films especially Transformers. It’s very popular here in Taiwan and is probably the coolest film I’ve ever seen.

I was wondering, if it’s not too much trouble, Could I please request an Autographed picture of yourself.

enclosed is my sase.

I’m sorry if my handwriting is hard for you to read or my English is not easy for you to understand. That’s because English is not my language.

Thanks for spending your precious time reading my letter and thanks for your autograph! I appreciate it!!


Wish you a big success

Shane

Re: What do you think of my letter?

by KatrinaLouise » Tue Oct 06, 2009 4:23 pm

Sorry I misread it.

You should lay it out the first way as in:

Josh Duhamel
The Gersh Agency NY
41 Madison Avenue
33rd Floor
New York, NY 10010
USA

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