I think it needs a lot more of a personal touch- after all, that could be about any singer in the world

I think it's very good.

C+ if all you're adding to that is their name.

It would be an A+ if you tell them why you're a fan and why theyre your idol.

Hi,

I'm not English/American, I'm French .
{{ Excuse my English }}

Can you say to me if it is good because I am afraid ... LOOL

"Dear ****,
My name is Benoit, I'm 17 and I'm French.
I'm a very big fan of yours.
You're really my favorite singer, my idol.
Additionally, you're absolutely charming !
So, it would mean a lot to me if you would be kind enough to autograph the photo enclosed to my letter.
Thanks you very much and I wish you all the best for the future.
Benoit, a French fan"


how do you rate it? It's correct ??