by mcgonagall » Sat Apr 04, 2009 12:27 am
Great letter Aamir

. However, it does have some issues regarding grammar - some parts of it don't make sense. I know I may sound rather picky by pointing this out and indeed, it is highly unlikely that Lemar won't fulfil your requests because of these minor mistakes, but I thought I'd inform you of this anyhow - just to make your letter even more perfect.
I can point out the mistakes you made but only if you want me to!
P.S. If I were you I wouldn't say that you notice how good his voice is in only
some of his songs!
Junaid
Great letter Aamir :D. However, it does have some issues regarding grammar - some parts of it don't make sense. I know I may sound rather picky by pointing this out and indeed, it is highly unlikely that Lemar won't fulfil your requests because of these minor mistakes, but I thought I'd inform you of this anyhow - just to make your letter even more perfect.
I can point out the mistakes you made but only if you want me to!
P.S. If I were you I wouldn't say that you notice how good his voice is in only [i]some[/i] of his songs!
Junaid