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Hello, Steven Moffat.

A few observations from the first two eps: in the titles? When they kick in it kinda fades. This lacks impact, needs more punch.

Also, in said titles, the TARDIS is too brightly blue. Needs to be dimmed down a bit. Thirdly, Capaldi is mesmerizing. However, the sound mastering, especially from Ep 2 makes his delivery of dialogue a bit hard to hear. And his voice gets muffled in all that crazy music and fx. Dull it down so we can really hear him in future eps.

Otherwise? Good job so far, kudos

D.

dejcallisto wrote:Hello, Steven Moffat.

A few observations from the first two eps: in the titles? When they kick in it kinda fades. This lacks impact, needs more punch.

Also, in said titles, the TARDIS is too brightly blue. Needs to be dimmed down a bit. Thirdly, Capaldi is mesmerizing. However, the sound mastering, especially from Ep 2 makes his delivery of dialogue a bit hard to hear. And his voice gets muffled in all that crazy music and fx. Dull it down so we can really hear him in future eps.

Otherwise? Good job so far, kudos

D.

why did you write this here? Steven Moffat will most likely not see this! Your better off sending fanmail to him and mail off a letter, even then I doubt it will get read.