does anyone want to read the short story i wrote

[miley cyrus fan]

hey guys as alot of you know id like to be a writer one day, anyway for one of my english homework assignments ,was to write a short story im just about done, anyway im wondering when im done, if anybody would like to read it because im debating on wheter to post it on the fourm or pm it to who wants to read it anyway if you wanna read it just reply peace.

[missmaexox]

I'd love to read it!

[RoverBowden]

I'd happily give it a read

[margotchanning]

I'd love to read it Anthony! {thumb2}

[miley cyrus fan]

alright cool guys if im not done it tonight ill be tommorow so ya ill pm it to your or post it on the board. and thanks guys. theirs a ton of references to things, and im pretty sure theirs are a few only ann(marg) will catch on too. its not super long and if youve read real books in the past it should be nothing.

btw ann still no richard autograph everday at fourth period i listen to my 5 fav carpenters songs on my mp4 and think maybe today will be the day i get richards auto. anyway i really hope it comes soon because like i said it me over 2 dollars to send(large sase and regular postage)

thanks again guys hope you engoy it and i think ill pm it to you guys because its fairly aproriate ,but obviously something that would be ok for a ninth grade english class may not be ok to some younger kids here.

[miley cyrus fan]

ok guys its done what ill do is ill send you a couple chapters now and send the rest tommorow because i really dont feel like it now

[miley cyrus fan]

actually ill just post it on the board everything in the first couple chapters is apropriate theirs a bit of stuff later that isnt thou whill ill pm to the people who asked to read it
it stars here

Pitcher to burn

By Anthony
Prologue
Alex stone was your regular ninth grade student he had his own circle of friends and really cared about his studies. He was not a bad guy he took care of his friends and his younger brother, he was pretty short and fairly skinny. His life was simple he would go to school, do his work & study. Then go home and be a typical 15 year old he would play video games watch TV and play on the computer. Those simple after school activity’s changed from little things anyone can do to something you can impress people by when he was discovered by the schools baseball team (you will find out how he was discovered in chapter 2). Anyway I hope you enjoy the story and my unique writing style ( like how I start each chapter off with some of my favorite quotes from various TV characters songs and celebrities ,and how each chapter is named after a song).
Chapter one wheel in the sky
Homer Simpson English who needs it I’m never going to England
So what did you get on that math quiz Alex said Rory (his best friend)? a b+ he responded, not bad said Rory I got A A- he said as Alex ,himself and Keith were sitting down for lunch. Ah man we got gym next period said Rory, so whets so bad about gym weir playing baseball again today, maybe ill hit another home run today said Keith, by the way I’m going to play for the Mets one day first base just like my namesake Keith Hernandez . you just got lucky Keith said Alex after all Rory was pitching and he’s no Pedro Martinez, don’t forget I’m pitching today, you wont even reach base, unless somebody makes a error. Alex no offense but you never pitched a day in your life can you even throw a baseball, I mean Rory plays fetch with his dog at least. Why don’t you just shut up you’ll see when we get to class said Alex.
30 minutes later outside at the baseball diamond
Alright boys before we play ball, I would like you all to welcome mr.gomez who teaches math and also coaches the baseball team. Said mr.cohen Now today in class hes going to pick some students who demonstrate good baseball skills, and good sportsmanship ,to play at this years city charity fair. obviously you will be playing ,for our school baseball team. now not only do you get to play infront ,of 5 thousand people for that one game, but those players will be on this years grade nine baseball team, their will be 2 games a week and 3 practices a week. Anyway boys since Keith’s team won the coin toss they get to bat first now lets play ball. Alex will be pitching today for his team.

Chapter 2 –I am the greatest
Oh how I wish their were more than 24 hours in a day-elvis presley(viva las vegas(
Leading off for the junior Yankees(keiths team) keith piazza. Said mr.gomez
And pitching for the junior mets(alex team) alex stone.
Alex struck keith out with three pitches. Maybe he does have something stuck up his sleeve said rory.
The game finished 3-0 junior mets alex pitched a 2 hit complete game shutout(both of those hits were from keith thou) after the game mr.gomez announced the players which were selected. the three best friends(alex rory and keith) easily made the team all three had great days with the bat (keith went 2 for 4 with a double and triple, rory went 3 for 4 with a home run and 2 doubles and alex went 2 for 4 with a rbi double and single)
That day after school the boys decided not to take the bus home and to use their fare money at the arcade and celebrate, so they walked to the arcade. They played a few games had some fun you know guy stuff. Rory set the high score on eternal flame and won a coupon for a cd and dvd of his choice from the prize counter.
The boys all went to rorys house after the arcade, rorys mom asked wheir they were and why they got home late. And rory told his mom everything, his mom jumped to his son and started huggin him , while the alex and keith laughed their faces off at him.

Chapter 3 Manic Monday
Hold on maybe your loosing it the waters high and your jumping in to it-taylor swift (tied together with a smile)
Alex get up for school said his mom(lena) ah man already but I was just their Friday, this sucks school is too dam long 5 and a half hours of listenting to useless information im never gonna use in life. Yes you will alex if you hadnt gone to school you think you would be reading and engoying those clerks comic books? Why wouldn’t I said alex? Because smart person would you know how to read no. I guess said alex , but can I atleast come home early to watch the mets game at 1? No said lena you will be able to cacth the last couple innings anyway and youll catch all of the second game tonight(they were playing a doubleheader because of the rain delay the other day) besides you got your own baseball woes todays your first practice you get to leave class early today. That’s right said alex. Anyway bud get dressed grab a pop tart brush your teeth then get in the car alright. Ya fine said alex.
On their way to school of all songs to be playing on the radio was coincidently the bangles Manic Monday. Alex thought in his head you said it susansa(susana was the lead singer of the group) just as the chorus of the song was starting a true turn for the worse happened. A driver ran a red light and nailed their car big time. Alex was unconscious and Lena had a really bad head gash she didn’t care how bad she was bleeding her concern was obviously for her son. She was fortunate thou a little girl walking with her grandmother saw what was going on and her and her grandmother rushed to the scene. The lady called ambulance immediately and also notified the police to arrest the man who ran the red(his car was totaled also and he was in less then quality shape himself) the ambulance got their within a few minutes and rushed both Alex and Lena to the hospital as well as the red lighting running jackass.
Later that day alex gained conciousness. But the doctors wanted him to stay overnight, lena was discharged after receiving, 5 stiches to the head, but obviously chose to stay the night with her son, and the man who caused all this carmen(the guy who ran the red) was discharged with a mild concussion and then put into police custody.
Meanhwille at school the kids were notified that baseball practice was cancelled because their was no pitcher and told it was early dismissal because the teachers had no work for them( everybody got to go home not just the baseball team because it was a open practice and all the classes were supposed to be their and watch it) the boys were happy about that because well they could watch the mets game, they wondered wheir alex was thou, keith said he probably faked sick just to watch the game, he’s being treated like a king he probably ate a pint of ice cream already. No he hasn’t said Maria( a friend of alex sister and alex) didn’t you hear he got into a car accident on his way to school he’s alright but he was told to spend the night for observation. Oh my god that’s terrible, do you know if we can go visit him said rory? Oh ya their isnt a problem I just got off the phone with Lorelai (his sister) right now if you like I can drive you im on the way their myself. Thanks Maria said keith and rory.

ends here for now ill pm the people who wanna read the rest later. btw it takes time for the plot to really set up this is just the beggining. but ya i hope you engoy it also please dont correct my spelling mistakes this is just my rough draft. thanks

[miley cyrus fan]

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i thought you guys wanted to read it