Is this a good letter?

[peace1423]

"Hello Taylar,:]
My names Leah im 14 and I
am a very big fan of yours,have been
ever since i saw you on den brother.I think
you are a very talented actress and i
can so tottally see you being the next big
movie star. Im very excited to see whats comming
up for you in the near future:]
This letter is very short but I have trouble expressing
what I need to say with words so I cant really
think of what to say other then telling you how much
of a fan i am and that i will be a supporter of yours
for as long as i live<3"

I typed a draft and this is it i might change some things... is there something i should add or take out? and should i need
to ask for an auto graph? im not sure if this is even the right spot to ask this its my first time on here!

[RYAN-J]

That letter sounds good Leah! Definitely want to be sure and ask if they can send you a signed photo or if you include items for her to sign, ask her if she can sign the ones you sent. be sure and send a Return envelope with your address on it and postage so she has a way to reply back to you!

Best of luck with your requst!

RYAN-J