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The very first sentence...
Posted: Fri May 09, 2008 7:24 pm
by namakemono
Well, what the title says really. I have a general idea of what I want to write in my letter (to Helena Bonham Carter), but trying to write the first line is stopping me write the rest. Much like with important essays.
Do I start with something kind of formal like "firstly, let me introduce myself" or just a "how are you"? I never know!
Please help or direct me somewhere with answers because I really want to send whilst she's seemingly replying!
Re: The very first sentence...
Posted: Fri May 09, 2008 7:28 pm
by Sammya
Hi!
When I was starting to write letters, I was wondering the same thing. Now, I always start my letter "Dear xxx, my name is *** and I'm *** years old. I live in ***." and then I start the paragraph about the celebrity like "Not long time ago I saw your movie XXX and I liked you there very much" or something like that. Not sure if other members do this in the same way, I just wanted to help you with telling you my way
Sammya

Re: The very first sentence...
Posted: Fri May 09, 2008 7:29 pm
by brighton_4eva
namakemono wrote:Well, what the title says really. I have a general idea of what I want to write in my letter (to Helena Bonham Carter), but trying to write the first line is stopping me write the rest. Much like with important essays.
Do I start with something kind of formal like "firstly, let me introduce myself" or just a "how are you"? I never know!
Please help or direct me somewhere with answers because I really want to send whilst she's seemingly replying!
i think you should start it with - my name is ............ and I am a fan of your fantastic acting abillity.
something like that! sam

Re: The very first sentence...
Posted: Fri May 09, 2008 7:31 pm
by namakemono
Thanks for the replies
So inbetween my two extremes of formality then lol XD
*spends 1932389 hours drafting perfectly written letter to her idol*
Re: The very first sentence...
Posted: Fri May 09, 2008 7:48 pm
by brighton_4eva
namakemono wrote:Thanks for the replies
So inbetween my two extremes of formality then lol XD
*spends 1932389 hours drafting perfectly written letter to her idol*
Ha Ha!
Have you had any success with celeb email?
sam {thumb2}
Re: The very first sentence...
Posted: Fri May 09, 2008 7:53 pm
by namakemono
brighton_4eva wrote:namakemono wrote:Thanks for the replies
So inbetween my two extremes of formality then lol XD
*spends 1932389 hours drafting perfectly written letter to her idol*
Ha Ha!
Have you had any success with celeb email?
sam {thumb2}
Never written to any celebs. Does it show? :razz:

Re: The very first sentence...
Posted: Fri May 09, 2008 7:55 pm
by Sammya
namakemono wrote:Thanks for the replies
So inbetween my two extremes of formality then lol XD
*spends 1932389 hours drafting perfectly written letter to her idol*
lol
You're welcome!
Good luck with your letter! {thumb2}
Sammya

Re: The very first sentence...
Posted: Fri May 09, 2008 8:11 pm
by Thumper
Hey!
I think it's better to keep your letter unique, and a bit whacky, so they remember who you are. It's fine to put smiley faces everywhere in your letter.
Say if it's a band, I would normally write:
Dear _______
I really like your work. I admire you etc.

First sentence/paragraph, I explain why I like them so much.
Then the next paragraphs about me, like
my name is _____ and I live in ______. I think it's a shame that hardly anyone's heard of you, where I live is full of chavs. 
I normally say if it's someone who wishes they were famous, or a band that's not that well heard of, but the reason changes each time, and sometimes the reason is really stupid.
The next paragraph I write is normally about what I like about their work/what projects I've enjoyed. For example: I
really like the song "_______," I particually enjoyed the album "______" because it's a bit crazy, and it keeps my parents out of my bedroom for a while (:
And then I finish with the Please can I have your autograph part, and wish them luck.
I know you asked for the first sentence, but I waffled on for a bit, I honestly have nothing better to do!
If you have any problems/questions, feel free to PM me,
Thumper@fanmail.biz
Thumper

Re: The very first sentence...
Posted: Fri May 09, 2008 11:51 pm
by Melindabear2002
Mine is usually Dear xxxx, My name is.... and then after that it depends on who it is really.
Re: The very first sentence...
Posted: Sat May 10, 2008 1:53 pm
by Shambler
Dear .......
My name is ..... and I am an ...-year old, massive fan of yours from ......... . I'm writing to tell you how much I admire your career, and also to kindly ask if you would grant my request for an autographed picture of yourself.
