Proof read letter

[smokeyjoe4848]

Dear Aerosmith,
Hey there!!! What’s going on? My name is Allen Arnold, and I am 16 years old. I am a HUGE fan of Aerosmith; I honestly think I have all of your CD’s. I took up drums a couple of years ago and can now play almost any of your songs, it really is awesome. To tell you a little bit about myself I am a high school swimmer and cross-country runner, I have a lovely girlfriend, named Kayla, and well life is just treating me great right now!!
When it comes to music you Aerosmith are above and beyond everyone else, in my opinion!!! Ever since I have heard the song Don’t Want to Miss a Thing, I have been hooked. I think it is awesome how you guys have added an orchestra into such a beautiful song. I also like the song Dude, and Janie's Got a Gun. Every time I hear your music I just cant help but sing along, it’s great!! My mom, Vicky, is also a huge Aerosmith fan. I think she might even be more so than me, we have a room in the back dedicated to Aerosmith stuff. When it come to music Aerosmith is number one in our household.

Anyways I am writing you this to ask if it would be possible to get 2 signed, and possibly personalized (one to Allen and one to Vicky; only if you have the time), picture of the band. This would defenantly complete mine and my mothers Aerosmith collection and would also look AWESOME on my wall. If it would help any I could send an addressed and stamped envelope to you, to send it back in. Thanks SOO much for your time!!
Sincerely,
Allen Arnold

Address:
Allen Arnold
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P.S.- I will be anxiously awaiting your reply!!

[Pencebaseball9]

It looks good as I skim through it. You may want to edit out your personal info though just for this site.

[smokeyjoe4848]

and what about a letterhead or text colors?

[classictvguy]

I dont think it matters what color your text is. You probably should take down some of the personal things on the site, but keep the in your letter.

[smokeyjoe4848]

I did, should I put my header in color so that it stands out?

[Pencebaseball9]

That would be cool.
A personal tip of mine is to decorate the envelope you send it in. A bright orange or green envelope will be more noticable in a stack of 200 white ones.

[smokeyjoe4848]

It will still get through the mail if it is drawn on?
and wher can i get green10x13 envelopes?

[jdp3577]

It will still get through the mail if it is drawn on?
and wher can i get green10x13 envelopes?

why are you sending a 10x13 if you arent including a SASE?

If it would help any I could send an addressed and stamped envelope to you, to send it back in.

If it was me, Id go ahead and send the SASE while I was at it

[smokeyjoe4848]

Yeah that was a mistake, I didnt mean to put that in there. I do plan on sending a SASE (I've been sending too many emails is the reason that is in there)

[Pencebaseball9]

I don't think you can actually purchase envelopes in green, but I just color mine nicely on the backside, where it doesn't interupt any important information.