Help with the letter please

[fan0258]

Hello,

I wanted to know if what I wrote is good and if anything is wrong please correct me.

This is what I wrote:

"I have enclosed a photo which I would greatly appreciate if you could please sign it for me but if not I would be happy to receive your own signed photo."

What do you think?

[Chrissy]

That sounds like a very nice way to ask. Good job!!!

[James]

I always write:

My name is ....... and I am ... years old. I really like seeing you ...............................
I really like seeing you star in .............. and I think that you are a fantastic.......... I hope you continue to have a very sucessful career.
I was wondering if I could have your autograph, because I would love to have such a good ...........'s autograph. Please can you sign my photo of you.
Thank you for giving up your time, and I hope that you can reply soon.
Yours Sincerely,

Name

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Hope this helps
James

[TheCollector]

All this advice is really sound

Just write how you feel comfortable. As long as you are polite you will be OK!

Ian {thumb2}