My First Personal Letter

[aamir]

Thank you for all your responses. I didn't think it was good enough, but some of you have made me a bit more confident (especially eastendersfan). I think I will cut down by maybe half a page on my next letter but I am happy with this one. Once again, thanks for all your compliments. I maybe will post my next letter here because it made me smile with all the happy comments I got. {thumb2}

[aamir]

Oh, and just for the record, I didn't know that damn was swearing. I didn't even put it in asteriks.

[cb1892]

Thank you for all your responses. I didn't think it was good enough, but some of you have made me a bit more confident (especially eastendersfan). I think I will cut down by maybe half a page on my next letter but I am happy with this one. Once again, thanks for all your compliments. I maybe will post my next letter here because it made me smile with all the happy comments I got. {thumb2}

Are your letters not supposed to be heart felt and private? They're not a chance to show off your writing skills to others on this forum.

[aamir]

Good point, cb. I have changed my mind. To be honest, this letter actually contained some more private stuff that I wouldn't normally want people to see. I won't be posting my next letter. But thanks for your commends. They made me happy.

[EastendersFan]

I didnt see a problem in him posting his letter. I guess he just wanted some advice

I'm glad i made you confident about your letter. It really is incredible; I'm still embarrased

[aamir]

Thanks again. But why are you embarassed?

[EastendersFan]

I only write about 3 sentances about a person i write too telling them why i like them. Still, i could write to them again if im big fans of them but without requesting an autograph

[mcgonagall]

Great letter Aamir . However, it does have some issues regarding grammar - some parts of it don't make sense. I know I may sound rather picky by pointing this out and indeed, it is highly unlikely that Lemar won't fulfil your requests because of these minor mistakes, but I thought I'd inform you of this anyhow - just to make your letter even more perfect.

I can point out the mistakes you made but only if you want me to!

P.S. If I were you I wouldn't say that you notice how good his voice is in only some of his songs!

Junaid

[aamir]

Please tell me the grammatical errors. {thumb2}

[cb1892]

Have you not sent it yet?

He won't be at the venue for long will he?