What do you think of my letter?

[lim10337]

So the address should go like this (on the envelope)...

Shane XXX

No.37,
Longxiang Rd.,
Longtan Township,
Taoyuan County 325,
Taiwan (R.O.C.)


Josh Duhamel

The Gersh Agency NY
41 Madison Avenue
33rd Floor
New York, NY 10010
USA

OR go straight like this (on the envelope)...

Shane XXX
No.37, Longxiang Rd., Longtan Township, Taoyuan County 325, Taiwan (R.O.C.)

Josh Duhamel
The Gersh Agency NY, 41 Madison Avenue, 33rd Floor, New York, NY 10010, USA


Where should I add 'DO NOT BEND'?

Should I add 'AIR MAIL' on my envelope? If so, where should I add?

Write my English name? Shane? or Shane Chung (Shane plus my Chinese first name)?

[KatrinaLouise]

It's up to you if you want to put your chinese name as well.

Your self addressed envelope should have your name and your address on it. It does not really matter where you write do not bend or airmail.

and yes you've written the address for Josh Duhamel correctly.

[lim10337]

hmm...sorry you mean which one is correct?

xxx
xxxx
xxx
xxxx

OR

xxx, xxxx, xxx, xxxx

thank you

[KatrinaLouise]

Sorry I misread it.

You should lay it out the first way as in:

Josh Duhamel
The Gersh Agency NY
41 Madison Avenue
33rd Floor
New York, NY 10010
USA

[KamenRiderDecade2009]

I would tone down the letter a bit, Here is how I would send it.

Dear Josh,

My name is Shane. I’m from Taiwan. I’m 19 years old and a sophomore in Chung Yuan Christian University.

I am fan of you and your films especially Transformers. It’s very popular here in Taiwan and is probably the coolest film I’ve ever seen.

I was wondering, if it’s not too much trouble, Could I please request an Autographed picture of yourself.

enclosed is my sase.

I’m sorry if my handwriting is hard for you to read or my English is not easy for you to understand. That’s because English is not my language.

Thanks for spending your precious time reading my letter and thanks for your autograph! I appreciate it!!


Wish you a big success

Shane

[musicfan]

I would tone down the letter a bit, Here is how I would send it.

Dear Josh,

My name is Shane. I’m from Taiwan. I’m 19 years old and a sophomore in Chung Yuan Christian University.

I am fan of you and your films especially Transformers. It’s very popular here in Taiwan and is probably the coolest film I’ve ever seen.

I was wondering, if it’s not too much trouble, Could I please request an Autographed picture of yourself.

enclosed is my sase.

I’m sorry if my handwriting is hard for you to read or my English is not easy for you to understand. That’s because English is not my language.

Thanks for spending your precious time reading my letter and thanks for your autograph! I appreciate it!!


Wish you a big success

Shane

YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I Jept Saying Its a BIT To Long But Everyone Would Yell @ Me...lol But YES Thats How You Do It,,SHORT AND SIMPLE....Not Long And True Hollywood Story-ISH.

[musicfan]

Thank you.

But I'm still not sure how to say 'Beside, would you please fill out my questionnaire on another paper?'

Is that right? 'on another paper'....

No Not Like That:

Say IT Like This:

If IT Isnt Too Much Trouble I Attacted a QUESTIONAIRE..Could You Please Fill It Out...THANK YOU SOOO MUCH! Like That...ok?

[lim10337]

Can anyone help me check my questionnaire again? Thank you.

For Josh Only or Just For Josh(Is it ok? I need a title for this questionnaire...)

(1) How tall are you?
____________________________________________________________________________

(2) What do you usually do when you are free? ____________________________________________________________________________

(3) What’s your favorite film? ____________________________________________________________________________

(4) What are your favorite actor and actress? ____________________________________________________________________________

(5) What’s your favorite kind of music? ____________________________________________________________________________

(6) Is your next film called ‘When In Rome’? How do you like it?
____________________________________________________________________________

(7) What kind of character do you love playing the most? ____________________________________________________________________________

(8) What’s your favorite singer or group? ____________________________________________________________________________

(9) What’s your favorite kind of sport? ____________________________________________________________________________

(10)How do you like Taiwan? ____________________________________________________________________________

(11)What would you do to make the world the better place?
____________________________________________________________________________

(12)Do you keep any pet? What is it?
____________________________________________________________________________

(13)How do you like my English name, Shane? I feel down when somebody mistakes my name
as a name for girls…
____________________________________________________________________________



Any grammar fault in my questionnaire? especially the (13) I'm not quite sure how to say that...

[musicfan]

Can anyone help me check my questionnaire again? Thank you.

For Josh Only or Just For Josh(Is it ok? I need a title for this questionnaire...)

(1) How tall are you?
____________________________________________________________________________

(2) What do you usually do when you are free? ____________________________________________________________________________

(3) What’s your favorite film? ____________________________________________________________________________

(4) What are your favorite actor and actress? ____________________________________________________________________________

(5) What’s your favorite kind of music? ____________________________________________________________________________

(6) Is your next film called ‘When In Rome’? How do you like it?
____________________________________________________________________________

(7) What kind of character do you love playing the most? ____________________________________________________________________________

(8) What’s your favorite singer or group? ____________________________________________________________________________

(9) What’s your favorite kind of sport? ____________________________________________________________________________

(10)How do you like Taiwan? ____________________________________________________________________________

(11)What would you do to make the world the better place?
____________________________________________________________________________

(12)Do you keep any pet? What is it?
____________________________________________________________________________

(13)How do you like my English name, Shane? I feel down when somebody mistakes my name
as a name for girls…
____________________________________________________________________________



Any grammar fault in my questionnaire? especially the (13) I'm not quite sure how to say that...

In Question 11..it should be "...The World A Better Place"...In 12 It Should Be Pets With A "S"..And I Wouldnt Do The LAST QUESTION...Or Jus Say "Do You Like My American Name "Shane"....Ok? Good Luck!

[lim10337]

But if I ask 'Do you like my American name?' his answer would only be 'yes or no'...but I want more...

ps. are you sure 'American name'? not 'English name'?